I agree with regertz. Veryy effective, very affecting.
It really should be part of a longer piece.
Captain Average
"AGOL" <nemo1nemo@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
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> AN1: This piece is just an experiment in style for me, both in
writing
> from the viewpoint of only one particular character, and the format I
use
to
> tell the story. Those who know my work will see it's a bit different to
my
> usual stuff. Does it work? If not, why not? Anyway, thank you for
reading.
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