by Don Sample <dsample@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>
Aug 25, 2007 at 04:10 PM
In article <1i3dqoi.7yefj01s37eisN%ejablow@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>,
ejablow@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
(Eric Jablow) wrote:
> Chiropteran
> by Eric Jablow
>
I enjoyed that a lot. I was saddened when I learned that the WWN was
ceasing to print (though they're keeping their web site alive.)
You've got a bit of a problem during the fight scene. You keep
switching back and forth between present and past tense.
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